persuasive writing

 Dear mum

can I have a watch because all my friends have one.

If I had a  watch I cold tell the time when I had a watch  I new the time. and you tell me you will pick me up at cotter past three and I never no when its cotter past three.

When I had a watch I had the time not to rush in the morning and feed the dog and cats. Remember when i never ruched.

I hope you understand how I really want a watch love your girl Eva X X .